Friday 5 July 2013

Excerpt #2

Yeah, he's a second excerpt from my NaNoWriMo story. Here I'm gonna let you learn that Captain Charlie O'Donnell will break the rules and laws for the safety of he crew;

    Green eyes found the paper and she searched for Vanguard. ACCESS DENIED glared back at her in big red letters. She typed her clearance level and the word CLASSIFIED screamed at her. Now she was confused and curious. “The fuck is going on.”
    She searched the rest of her words and slumped back when ACCESS DENIED fixed itself to her screen with every tap. Hunter’s words were coming back to her; “Bullshit with a capital B.” Bullshit indeed.
    Typing Aries had the same response and she kicked at one of the legs on her desk in frustration. Somebody was watching what she was searching and they were stopping her from finding anything. With anger growing in her stomach, which was twisting itself around her spine, she dialled up command as another shower of rocks tinkered across the hull. It took a few minutes for the connection to be made and Matthias didn’t look too happy himself. “What is the progress of the Valhalla Captain?”
    She checked her watch, “We are twenty minutes into the belt with another forty to go. Admiral, why am I not being given access to the search directive?”
    The man didn’t miss a beat. “You must not have the correct clearance level.”
    “The search directive is public knowledge and I had access to basic information on a ship called Aries. Five minutes later I was denied access. Why am I being blocked of information?”
    “Perhaps,” the man begun, again, not missing a beat, “the asteroid belt is creating interference. May I suggest that calling Command on such trivial ideas is a waste of valuable time and resources.”
    “All due respect sir,” she began, keeping her voice level. Many a times she’d had Commanding Officer’s retain information from her and her crew only for it to bite them in the ass. This was not going to be one of those times. “My crew and I are throwing ourselves into god knows what. We don’t know what to expect out there but we deserve any information we can get on Aries and Vanguard. We are trying to prepare ourselves, allow us to do so-”
    “Captain O’Donnell, it is ridiculous to suggest that somebody is purposely restricting your access to information. Command has laws to uphold and retaining public knowledge is not one of them. If you are going to accuse any member of my staff of performing such a law then might I suggest you run it through the correct channels.”
    “Sir-”
    Matthias cut her off. Charlie swore. She hated politics. Hated higher ups pulling rank, blowing around crude answers. And she hated everything about this situation. Matthias knew something, or was hiding something. No doubt he’d already informed Command of her ‘accusations’. She sighed and fell back into her chair, letting a hand fall into her face to cover it. Going into this situation blind was not what she wanted. Going into any situation blind is something she never wanted.
    Command would most likely accuse her of creating a scene, of pointing fingers and trying to drag Matthias’ name through the mud. Her crew were known for not following the rules at the most ‘convenient’ of times. Not her words but Command’s. What that meant was that her crew apparently followed the rules when they could be bothered.
    Her eyes lit up on the intercom speakers. Well, if they were going to accuse her crew of not following the rules then why not put some truth to the lie. She got up and slammed on the speak button, “Torres! My office!”
    It was Eliot’s voice she heard come back at her, “He’s on his way.”
    Torres was running. She chuckled at the idea that she could instil such authority and demand to gain such a response. Charlie retook her seat, pulled the screen down flat and turned it to face the chair on the other side of her desk. The search directive was still up and Aries was still flashing Access Denied.
    The Irish appeared seconds later, falling into the room and his breathing laboured. “I didn’t do it.”
    Charlie just leaned back in her seat and nodded to the screen on her desk. “Get me in.”
    She watched as the man approached the desk, took a seat and pulled the screen closer towards him. Torres tapped his fingers across the protected glass, brows furrowing. A few moments later he shook his head and looked up at her. “You want me to break in? As in hack?”
    “Can you?”
    “It’s against UNC laws.”
    She leaned forward, folded her arms on the desk and said matter of fact, “Screw the laws. Get me in.”
    There was a moment where Torres simply stared at her with her eyes fixed on his. His mouth fell open and he wavered, finding his words. “They’ll find out, and I’ll be court marshalled and… and my career will be ruined.”
    Charlie held a hand up. “Torres. Torres!” the man halted any other words and waited. “Use my access. And I’ve green lighted you to do this. This is on me. If anybody tries to bring anything down on you, I’ll take the heat. I will not allow anybody to alter your career.”
    There was a moment as Torres looked over her expression, seeking the truthfulness of it all. “You can’t promise that kind of shit! Oh sweet Jesus I’m fucked.”
    “Torres! Fucking do this! We are not flying into this mission blind. Now get me access.”
    Almost as if he’d had a personality change the man bent himself over the screen and held his hands up. “Alright, alright, you only had to ask. Don’t bite my head off. Now,” he tapped at the screen a few times, “Command uses a series of firewalls, the best.”
    “Can you hack it?”
    Torres lifted his head with a smirk, “You think people hired me for my social etiquette?”

    Charlie rolled her eyes, folded her arms across her chest and let herself fall back into her seat. She checked the clock. They were twenty five minutes into the belt. Another thirty five and she could breathe a little better. The minutes ticked by in silence, save for the mutterings of Torres, and Charlie busied herself with looking over the words she’d written down and trying to figure out why Command had shut her out and why they were withholding information. 

Quite a lengthy excerpt but this is from chapter 5 and about 7000 words in. When I get to 10,000 I'll give you another excerpt. And look /\ a character you haven't really seen or heard from before. I'll try to include excerpts for all of the characters. 

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